Novel submission – some honest number crunching


Last year I wrote a novel. A historical novel called What Has Fallen From Heaven, about a girl in Roman Egypt whose gilded life is turned upside down when she is struck down with epilepsy. It wasn’t my first full-length manuscript, but it was the first I’d felt fully proud of, and so when I’d tidied it up (we’ll gloss over the research hours, the sub-standard children’s teas, and the grey hairs involved in that process) I began the follow-up marathon of submitting to agents. That was in the autumn, and unfortunately it was not a process that has been (so far at least) successful. I remain agentless, despite the carefully crafted synopses and cover letters, and the hours spent puzzling over witty asides that might win me the friendship of that cool agent on Twitter. Still, some positives came out of the process, and in case it’s of interest to others, I thought it might be worth having a look at the stats.

Based on some useful advice from Claire Wingfield, I kept the field wide and deep. Using a combination of the Writers Workshop Agent Hunter (£5 for a month’s subscription, for the searchable, online equivalent of the agents section of the Writers’ and Artists’ Yearbook) and online research, I approached all the UK agents I could find with an interest in historical fiction. I added in a few others – the US agent of someone who writes novels in the same era, a couple of agents who’d recently indicated they were looking for debut authors, one or two I’d met at conferences/events, and a last few who just look like clever, funny individuals I’d like to hang out with. I tailored the cover letter/synopsis/extract in each case, because they all like to keep their requirements subtly different, don’t they! I did it in a few tranches, in case there was early feedback I needed to respond to. These were the results:

Sent to 62
Of these:
Did not reply (of whom 1 had recently passed away) 25
Form rejection 21
Personalised rejection/feedback 15
Full MS request 1

There were a few disappointments. Some agents ask you to assume they’re not interested after a certain period, which is fine, but others promise a response but didn’t (or at least haven’t yet) deliver. In particular, I went to some lengths to submit to a United Agents Open House, which promised a response to everyone within 2 weeks (later extended to 4-6w); I never got one. I’m not sure if others had the same experience. And while getting a full MS request was a huge boost, it did make me sad when (despite an initial confirmation of receipt, and later, a very gentle nudge from me after a couple of months), that agent never came back to me. It was a highly reputable agency, but didn’t seem like professional behaviour. I wouldn’t trouble either of them with anything again (and yes, I dare say they’ll sleep easy!)

Overall though, submitting my novel was a heart-warming process. I had lots of positive feedback, and a couple of requests to send through what I write next. I did have one agent, a former Classicist with a strong interest in historical fiction, who was kind but firm in claiming that no-one likes Graeco-Roman fiction (it’s niche, admittedly). But I had compliments variously on the characters, the setting, and the plot, and if there was one frustration, it was that there was no overriding theme to the feedback to which I could respond from a practical perspective. It’s partly because of that that I’ve moved on to a number of new projects, long and short.

I haven’t given up altogether, though. There are a couple of amazing independent publishers who are particularly strong on historical fiction, and my manuscript is out with them at the moment. And I loved the opportunity to read an extract from What Has Fallen… last week at a Bristol’s Novel Nights live lit event – here, and I think a writeup is on the way – the feedback was lovely, and even if it ends up being a swan song, I feel like my manuscript will have gone out with a bang.

Thanks for reading. Do you have submission war stories you can share?

Until the next time,


Egyptian mummy portrait (NOT me looking mournful because no-one wanted my manuscript…)

6 thoughts on “Novel submission – some honest number crunching

  1. Hi Chloe,
    It sounds like you had a similar experience to me – accept you went one better than me, in that you had a request to see your complete manuscript! My children’s chapter book went out to so many agents (almost undoubtedly many of the same agents that yours went to), and is now with Matador, with a plan to self-publish this year! I’ve also blogged about my story towards publishing. If you feel like having a look, it is at Good luck in getting agented and published!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Hi Catherine, thank you for this, and for sharing your story. It’s great to hear from others in the same boat, but sounds like you’ve found a great way forward for your book anyway – I hope the launch is a big success. Best of luck, Chloe


  3. I’m so glad you’ve shared your experience – it’s such an isolating time, so it helps to know there are other people out there, silently waiting! It does seem a bit of an unfair process, because you are left completely in the dark and consistently warned NOT TO ENGAGE in case you run the risk of peeing anyone off. You’re so right – the submission guidelines are so subtly different, it’s almost as if they are trying to catch you out 😉 I self-published in the end – I know it’s not for everyone (I’m not even sure it was for me!) but I’ve grown into it and learned so much about the industry. The best part is having some modicum of control and not having to wait around for other people to make up their minds. But all you can do is keep making contacts, I’m sure eventually you will find just the right place for your book 🙂


    1. Thanks Evie, very grateful for the support and hearing some of your journey. Just had a look at your website: your books sound fascinating, and the covers are just gorgeous – not surprised the self-published route is working out well for you. Now I must be off to hammer out yet another slightly different synopsis for something! Thanks again and all the best for the future, Chloe

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Hi Chloe, writing this at the end of October 2017 and am just wondering if you have received any additional feedback concerning your book? Best wishes, Gershon


    1. Hi Gershon, thanks so much for your interest. I set this novel aside in the end. Have written one since that is out on submission with agents – so far have had three requests for the full manuscript, so perhaps I am improving! Onwards and upwards… Hope your own writing is going really well. Best wishes, Chloe

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s